MarkoO Posted December 30, 2012 Share Posted December 30, 2012 This is my first game for andorid and i would like to get some feedback from you guys :) could you review my game :) https://play.google....myAvoidversion2 here you go link to the "trailer" that i made nothing special because i have no editing skills xD http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=roRUnB_qIxc Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkoO Posted December 30, 2012 Author Share Posted December 30, 2012 yep the textures that are on the screenshots are not the best and i will have to change them. They got all morphed because it needs special width and hight. About the joystick I made that the whole background the, whole screen as a joystick so you can put your finger in the corner or anywhere on the screen and you will control the player the same way Phone calls are googleplay thing they just give the developer the statistics of the phone that the game was downloaded on every game has that Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423116 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeChipshop Member Posted December 30, 2012 Member Share Posted December 30, 2012 Like the look of that mate, well done. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423126 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkoO Posted December 30, 2012 Author Share Posted December 30, 2012 thank you for the fast feedback guys :) Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423134 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonnieJim Posted December 30, 2012 Share Posted December 30, 2012 good idea but I would give it a theme. More like a robotron type atmoshpere and not just circles and such. your saving little people or creatures from the bad guys or something like that. It needs character. Also have your controls in just one location otherwise your finger is always in the way. Changing the background color really adds no value. It's a design feature that seems just to be there because you learned how to do it. Maybe static backgrounds for each level. Make the point system smaller and bolder. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423148 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkoO Posted December 30, 2012 Author Share Posted December 30, 2012 good idea thank you plus i just made this video on how the touch screen works in the game http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cZmwJPfYLk&feature=youtu.be but yes i do like your feedback guys please keep them comming ,you are giving me some good info here :) Guth and hackdoom 2 Share Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423170 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guth Posted December 30, 2012 Share Posted December 30, 2012 good idea thank you plus i just made this video on how the touch screen works in the game http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cZmwJPfYLk&feature=youtu.be but yes i do like your feedback guys please keep them comming ,you are giving me some good info here :) LOL at the F**K when you died! Dev isnt good at his own game :laugh: (just kidding) Looks cool, I'd play but I dont have android Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423176 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkoO Posted December 30, 2012 Author Share Posted December 30, 2012 LOL at the F**K when you died! Dev isnt good at his own game :laugh: (just kidding) Looks cool, I'd play but I dont have android not GOOD cmon i made 955 hahaha and thank you Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423178 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ozgeek Posted December 30, 2012 Share Posted December 30, 2012 Reminds me of Doodle Grub on my iphone. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423214 Share on other sites More sharing options...
+jamesyfx Subscriber² Posted December 30, 2012 Subscriber² Share Posted December 30, 2012 The gameplay looks fun, others have mentioned the graphics are a bit plain but hey... I get why the score is transparent but if I were to throw a suggestion I would probably change that to a smaller, opaque number on the top left corner add the high score next to it in different colour so you know what target you have to beat. I'm no game designer though so perhaps my comments mean nothing. :laugh: Also I think when you get hit by a red orb something should happen like an explosion or something. Give the game a reason to end (complete destruction) rather than it just being because you hit a red one. :p MarkoO and Guth 2 Share Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423216 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkoO Posted December 30, 2012 Author Share Posted December 30, 2012 yea i can see that :) but that game is way better then mine :) Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423218 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haggis Veteran Posted December 30, 2012 Veteran Share Posted December 30, 2012 468 so far lol i like it MarkoO 1 Share Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423220 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkoO Posted December 30, 2012 Author Share Posted December 30, 2012 thank you for downloading it if you some how pass 1000 let me now :) The gameplay looks fun, others have mentioned the graphics are a bit plain but hey... I get why the score is transparent but if I were to throw a suggestion I would probably change that to a smaller, opaque number on the top left corner add the high score next to it in different colour so you know what target you have to beat. I'm no game designer though so perhaps my comments mean nothing. :laugh: Also I think when you get hit by a red orb something should happen like an explosion or something. Give the game a reason to end (complete destruction) rather than it just being because you hit a red one. :p that is a great idea thank you :) Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423234 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonnieJim Posted December 30, 2012 Share Posted December 30, 2012 made with corona I see. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423244 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkoO Posted December 30, 2012 Author Share Posted December 30, 2012 made with corona I see. yes Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423254 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Colin McGregor Posted December 30, 2012 Share Posted December 30, 2012 Sweet. its like a block version of the sumo game on bully MarkoO 1 Share Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595423268 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkoO Posted December 31, 2012 Author Share Posted December 31, 2012 Sweet. its like a block version of the sumo game on bully I totally forgot about that game but yes it is similar to it :) Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595424334 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haggis Veteran Posted December 31, 2012 Veteran Share Posted December 31, 2012 My wife appears to have stolen my phone to play this :@ lol MarkoO 1 Share Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595424690 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkoO Posted December 31, 2012 Author Share Posted December 31, 2012 My wife appears to have stolen my phone to play this :@ lol hahhhhahaha :) great this made my day Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595424778 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkoO Posted January 3, 2013 Author Share Posted January 3, 2013 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4EXCKmjQ5OM&feature=youtu.be i made some changes :) Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595431122 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hackdoom Posted January 4, 2013 Share Posted January 4, 2013 Just a couple of corrections to the 'Game Over' text, that I think would make it look better: "You lost control over your ship, and crashed into an asteroid field... You and all of your crew members are now dead because you didn't read the manual for driving a space ship!"Also, "Post your high scores to:" reads better. It's just a suggestion. :p As for the gameplay, it looks like fun... I'll definitely give it a try later! ^^ MarkoO 1 Share Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595432050 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkoO Posted January 4, 2013 Author Share Posted January 4, 2013 Just a couple of corrections to the 'Game Over' text, that I think would make it look more professional: It's just a suggestion. :p As for the gameplay, it looks like fun... I'll definitely give it a try later! ^^ THANK YOU :) i know somebody is going to fix that text :) my eng is not the best plus i have a dyslexia so i said f it xD i am changing the text as we speak :) one more time THANK YOU for the feedback :) hackdoom 1 Share Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595432060 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hackdoom Posted January 4, 2013 Share Posted January 4, 2013 Haha, you're welcome! My pleasure, really. :) MarkoO 1 Share Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595432074 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sxcnn Posted January 4, 2013 Share Posted January 4, 2013 I would like to test it but it isn't compatible with my android phone: Samsung Spica ... Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595432754 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkoO Posted January 4, 2013 Author Share Posted January 4, 2013 I would like to test it but it isn't compatible with my android phone: Samsung Spica ... damn that is a shame but thank you for the feedback :) Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/1128364-could-you-rate-my-game-and-give-me-some-feedback/#findComment-595432864 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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