Sethos Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803804 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rappy Veteran Posted September 16, 2008 Veteran Share Posted September 16, 2008 Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803816 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corris Veteran Posted September 16, 2008 Veteran Share Posted September 16, 2008 Zomg, Zack from....Power Rangers! Do do do do do, Go Go Power Rangers! Do Do Do Do Do Can you spot your name in this pic? Taken from Wikipedia's entry on neowin. :) I wasn't in there, but still pretty cool! Mine is, :D your right... heres a lime cat Gawd I haz notin seen that pix fa yonkies! Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803814 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minimoose Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Just saw Metallica playing The Day That Never Comes live on Jools Holland, it was sweet :D Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803818 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sethos Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Just saw Metallica playing The Day That Never Comes live on Jools Holland, it was sweet :D Stop with the sensible talk, please! Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803820 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew Lyle Global Moderator Posted September 16, 2008 Global Moderator Share Posted September 16, 2008 Just saw Metallica playing The Day That Never Comes live on Jools Holland, it was sweet :D Write a review about it! And post it one sentence at a time here :D Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803826 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rappy Veteran Posted September 16, 2008 Veteran Share Posted September 16, 2008 Write a review about it! And post it one sentence at a time here :D Your becoming worse then me! Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803830 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cormier6083 Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Just saw Metallica playing The Day That Never Comes live on Jools Holland, it was sweet :D Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803834 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sethos Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Chapter 1:The Mysterious Stranger It was a cold night as a stranger walked into their campsite just as if she had gone to get firewood and had just gotten back.The first to notice her was Inuyasha,and he was startled,for he had not been paying much attention all night."Hey,who the hell are you?!?!"he demanded,startling his friends. "Uhhhhhh..."said Kagome,as she glared at Inuyasha for his rudeness."What he means to say-"she started. "I know he meant,'Hey,who the hell are you?!?!',and I'm used to it...sorta."the stranger said off-handedly,as though she was all of a sudden awkward. "What do you mean by that?"questioned Sango. "How will I explain this...so you'll belive me?"she pondered. "Why not start by telling us your name?"Kagome said pleasantly. She could tell that this stranger was not from around here,for the simple fact that,her clothes were of modern dress.What was strange though,was that her clothes were all boy's clothes.She wore shorts down to her knees,and she wore a shirt that was a fake ad for some "Roadkill Cafe" place.(A\n:I want to say now,that in my version,we all speak English,and can read it too.*sigh*It felt good to get that off my chest!!I don't want people questioning my authority as author!!!Yeah!!I now have authority!!)So,naturally,she was quite curious as to who this strange little girl was,and how she got here.Well,little was slightly unfair,as she just seemed to be on the short side.This stranger was carrying a modern gym bag,and it was bulgeing(Sp?)in odd places,as if it was carrying a number of interestingly shaped objects.The stranger opened her bag,and to everyone's astonishment,pulled out a regular sized lawn chair!!(A\n:These do NOT fit in gym bags!!)She opened it and sat down,as though she had done nothing out of the ordinary. "My name is Kara."she stated,then frowned in slight distaste."Do you think my name is weird?" They were all still staring at her,even Kagome who frequently told Inuyasha that staring was rude.Kara,however,had noticed none of this,and was still talking. "...and people always call me names that I don't like,and I think my REAL name is kind of strange.What do you think?"she chattered away happily,not much awkwardness remaining.She seemed to be enjoying herself just being there,and said so."I am so happy to finally meet you guys!!"she squealed.That's when they noticed that her eye was twitching. "Hey,are you some kind of phyco,or are twitching eyes normal where you come from?!?!"Inuyasha said very bluntly. "Oh,that.I want to touch your ears,but have too much respect for you to come out and do so."she calmly stated. "Why do people from your time always want to touch my ears?!?!"he inquired of Kagome,rather annoyed."And don't tell me she ain't from your time,I can tell she is just by her clothes!!They're funny,like yours!!"he fumed. "Different style though."Miroku noticed,making the himself known. "Hey,Miroku?How come you haven't done anything perverted yet?"Sango wondered. "Guys just don't come on to me."Kara said,and she knew it to be the simple truth."I have nooooooo idea why,"she continued,her voice dripping with sarcasm,"they just don't.Plus I'm 13."She knew that Miroku would hit on an 11 year old,but she said it anyway. "Lucky."said Sango,annoyed at Kara's good fortune of immunity to Miroku. "So,why are you here,and how did you get here?"Kagome finally asked. "Forget how I got here,that's not important!!"she said with so much exitement,that it looked like she would explode,"What DOES MATTER is that I come from not only another time,but another demention!!There you guys are just cartoon charachters,and I have seen a lot of episodes!!I could help you,even if you've gone past the episodes that I've seen,because before I left,I mugged Mary Poppins,took a good look at her bag,and made one of my own.Although,"she admitted"I made some major alterations to the function,so now I can pull out stuff I haven't even put in!!But there are a few drawbacks..."she said hesitantly. "Are they big ones?"Kagome asked,facinated. "Depends on what you call big..."Kara continued,"I can usually pull out things that are useful,but some times I can't,in fact,some times I pull out things that are just plain weird!!" Shippo who had been very quiet and well behaved during this conversation,finally spoke."What kinds of weird things?"he asked with innocent curious eyes. Immediatly,Kara's eyes and fingers began to twitch,and they could all see how she longed to gush over how cute he was.As if he sensed this,Shippo went to sit in Kagome's lap. "Well,one time I pulled out this adorable*eye twitch*kitten.I-It was fun*major eye twitch*to pet it."That was all she could manage before she had to dig through her bag to find something to pet.Triumphantly,she pulled out a live fox cub(normal),and began to pet it. Shippo sweatdropped.-_-'(A\n:I have always wanted to sweatdrop!!) "So you wish to join us in our quest for the Shikon Shards?"Sango summed up nearly all that had been said. "If it would be alright with you..."Kara was all of a sudden shy again. "Inuyasha,what do you think?"Kagome passed the buck to him. "Well...I guess freak girl can come along,provided that she will be useful every once in a while."Inuyasha said hesitantly. "Ramen?"Kara asked,as she pulled some out of her bag. "YUP!!!SHE CAN COME!!Inuyasha could barely contain himself. "Time for bed!!"Kagome said to Shippo."This has been a lot of exitement for just one hour!!"Seeing the pouty look on his face not unlike Inuyasha's,she added"All of us are very tired!!" Kara was too ready to sleep,she wanted to have dreams about the adventures she might have,so she simply pulled a sleeping bag out of her gym bag and asked if anyone needed anything,before drifting off to sleep. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803844 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rappy Veteran Posted September 16, 2008 Veteran Share Posted September 16, 2008 Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803850 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sethos Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Chapter 2:The walk to the village The next day,they decided to move on.The next village was not far away,and there was a rumor of a special demon with Shikon Shards.This demon was rumored to be very tricky,trickyer(Sp?)than any demon they had faced yet.(Except mayby Naraku.)Not only tricky,but strange too. "If I can get an idea of what part your at,I can plan accordingly."Kara said logicly. "We just finished with those new reincarnations of Naraku's."Kagome said. "And that jerk Koga."Inuyasha added. Kara was very disapointed."Awwww,I wanted to see that go on!!!"she said. "Well,"said Kagome,"I'm sure him meeting you would have been an...'interesting' experience." "He sure didn't think much of half-demons."Miroku said with a gleam in his eye."Inuyasha seemed to get on his nerves a lot.Could it be because Koga laid claim on Kagome?And of course Inuyasha wouldn't stand for that!Koga thought that a half-demon didn't deserve Kagome."he said,and then he looked at Inuyasha."Not that he was right!!!" "I think half-demons are cool!!They aren't full demons,which are usually evil,yet they have demonic strength.People are wrong to segragate(Sp?)against them."Kara said with a sigh. Inuyasha looked suprised,because most people feared or hated him."You don't think I'm a freak?"he asked cautiously. "Absolutely not!!!"she sounded offended at the very thought."In fact,"she added as she reached into her bag,"in my dimension you're very popular!!!Take a look!!"She handed him the first manga(A\n:Is that right?Am I correct in understanding that manga is the comics,and anime is the cartoons on T.V.?)of the series.(A\n:I don't have that stupid Feudal Fantasy series,I picked the other one.I currently have 1-6,and then just a while ago I got 14-15!!Some guys at my school have 7&8.I also have 3 DVDs.) Inuyasha looked at the book,eyes boggleing,and asked slowly,"So you know what we thought at all these times in your books?" "Oh,yeah.Also,I've seen the anime,so I know a lot more than just what is in my books!!!"Kara said happily. "If you tell anyone what I think about,I'll kill you myself!!!"Inuyasha said defensively. "What?Oh right.I wouldn't embarass you just for the sake of it.Perish the thought!!!"Kara said as she was digging through her bag.She found what she was looking for,and started to play with her yo-yo. Shippo,who had gotten excited at the thought of emmbarassing Inuyasha,now looked curiously at the strange toy. Kagome seeing his interest,explained,"That's a yo-yo,Shippo.It goes up and down and keeps your hands busy." "Wow,can I see it?"he asked in his most polite voice. "Sure,you can keep it."Kara said,happy to be able to at least talk to Shippo. Shippo,who was walking on the ground,started to play with his new yo-yo.This,if you think carefully,created a problem."I think it's broken!!"he said sadly. "Nah,just sit on someone's shoulder and try it out."Kara replied,looking through her bag again."I'm not sure if I can pull what I want out!!"she said struggling with her bag."AHHHH!!!LION!!!Okay,nevermind it's gone now.Wow,having this can be dangerous!!"she panted from the effort of shoving a lion into her bag. Sango was concerned."Have you ever pulled out something really life threatening?"she asked,eyeing the bag nervously. "Not really.One time,I pulled out this comedian,and he was so awful I almost killed myself!!"she said,pretending to gag. During the entire conversation,Miroku had been getting closer to Sango.Given a perfect opportunity he sprung into action. "What's a comedi-AAHHHHHHH!!!MIROKU!!!"she said as she was getting out her bone boomerang and whacking Miroku over the head with it. "30 minutes.Isn't that a record?"Kara said looking at the stopwatch she had been concealing."I still can't find what I want!!"she said as she shook her head and sighed."I'm looking for a book and it's-HERE IT IS!!!!"she said as she pulled "Summoning Demons for Dummies" out of her bag. "Why would you summon a demon?!?!I don't usually fight them for fun you know!!!"Inuyasha yelled as he read the cover. Kara sweatdropped.-_-'(A\n:I FINALLY GOT TO SWEATDROP!!)"I summon helpful,good demons and they are usually very friendly and willing to help.There are stubborn demons that happen to be good,"she stared pointedly at Inuyasha,and when he didn't get the hint,she continued,"so demons like that usually require a sacrifice of some sort."Seeing the uneasy looks on her new friend's faces she added,"But it is usually some plant or some sacred dirt or somthing like that." "Yeah,"Kagome remarked,"why would a good demon want a human sacrifice?" "Hey,what about animals?!?!"said Shippo indignantly. "Animals too."Kagome nodded. They had stopped,and were waiting for Miroku to regain contiousness(Sp).As they looked at his swirly eyed form,Sango noticed something. "Hey,look!!The village is 2 minutes away!!"she shouted with excitement. ~Way to go Miroku!!Do some stupid perverted thing right before we get to the village!!Now we all have to wait for you!!~Sango shook her head. At this moment Miroku woke up and started walking to the village like nothing was wrong,causeing Sango to chase him in an attempt to knock him out again,and drag him to the vilage.She only succeded in chasing him into the village crazy person.She was carrying an armfull of sandals shouting,"Fish for sale!Fish for sale!They look lovely in vases!" A lot of people were starting to stare.They all wanted to see how the nut would react.She looked at Miroku and said,"Hey,you're cute!!"This was too much for Sango,who burst into tears. "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!MIROKU FINALLY FOUND A GIRLFRIEND!!"she said as she rolled on the ground. The others had decided to run down to the village as well,and arrived just in time to hear the lady's comment on Miroku.It was too much for Kara as well,and she joined Sango in rolling on the ground in laughter.Inuyasha was chuckling to himself,and Shippo ran onto Miroku's shoulder and asked if he was going to say his famous phrase.Miroku stayed silent but he was noticably(Sp?)blushing.The lady was young,had black glossy hair,and was fairly pretty,but Miroku wanted a sane girlfriend.The lady just scowled at the two girls on the ground,and no one seemed to notice that she had orange eyes.They glowed in anger as the girls tried to collect themselves.She pointed at them and said"You may laugh,but you are the same as me!!"And the girls just stared at her for a moment. "Which one of us are you talking to?"Kara was puzzled. "You are both like me,but in different ways."the woman replied."My nickname is Luna.I have a full title,but I don't wish to share it." "Luna,huh?I know what that has to do with."Kara was looking very confused,nevermind how sure she sounded. "You do,do you?Then you know I am not to be taken lightly!"and with that she cooly walked away. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803854 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cormier6083 Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Chapter 1:The Mysterious StrangerIt was a cold night as a stranger walked into their campsite just as if she had gone to get firewood and had just gotten back.The first to notice her was Inuyasha,and he was startled,for he had not been paying much attention all night."Hey,who the hell are you?!?!"he demanded,startling his friends. "Uhhhhhh..."said Kagome,as she glared at Inuyasha for his rudeness."What he means to say-"she started. "I know he meant,'Hey,who the hell are you?!?!',and I'm used to it...sorta."the stranger said off-handedly,as though she was all of a sudden awkward. "What do you mean by that?"questioned Sango. "How will I explain this...so you'll belive me?"she pondered. "Why not start by telling us your name?"Kagome said pleasantly. She could tell that this stranger was not from around here,for the simple fact that,her clothes were of modern dress.What was strange though,was that her clothes were all boy's clothes.She wore shorts down to her knees,and she wore a shirt that was a fake ad for some "Roadkill Cafe" place.(A\n:I want to say now,that in my version,we all speak English,and can read it too.*sigh*It felt good to get that off my chest!!I don't want people questioning my authority as author!!!Yeah!!I now have authority!!)So,naturally,she was quite curious as to who this strange little girl was,and how she got here.Well,little was slightly unfair,as she just seemed to be on the short side.This stranger was carrying a modern gym bag,and it was bulgeing(Sp?)in odd places,as if it was carrying a number of interestingly shaped objects.The stranger opened her bag,and to everyone's astonishment,pulled out a regular sized lawn chair!!(A\n:These do NOT fit in gym bags!!)She opened it and sat down,as though she had done nothing out of the ordinary. "My name is Kara."she stated,then frowned in slight distaste."Do you think my name is weird?" They were all still staring at her,even Kagome who frequently told Inuyasha that staring was rude.Kara,however,had noticed none of this,and was still talking. "...and people always call me names that I don't like,and I think my REAL name is kind of strange.What do you think?"she chattered away happily,not much awkwardness remaining.She seemed to be enjoying herself just being there,and said so."I am so happy to finally meet you guys!!"she squealed.That's when they noticed that her eye was twitching. "Hey,are you some kind of phyco,or are twitching eyes normal where you come from?!?!"Inuyasha said very bluntly. "Oh,that.I want to touch your ears,but have too much respect for you to come out and do so."she calmly stated. "Why do people from your time always want to touch my ears?!?!"he inquired of Kagome,rather annoyed."And don't tell me she ain't from your time,I can tell she is just by her clothes!!They're funny,like yours!!"he fumed. "Different style though."Miroku noticed,making the himself known. "Hey,Miroku?How come you haven't done anything perverted yet?"Sango wondered. "Guys just don't come on to me."Kara said,and she knew it to be the simple truth."I have nooooooo idea why,"she continued,her voice dripping with sarcasm,"they just don't.Plus I'm 13."She knew that Miroku would hit on an 11 year old,but she said it anyway. "Lucky."said Sango,annoyed at Kara's good fortune of immunity to Miroku. "So,why are you here,and how did you get here?"Kagome finally asked. "Forget how I got here,that's not important!!"she said with so much exitement,that it looked like she would explode,"What DOES MATTER is that I come from not only another time,but another demention!!There you guys are just cartoon charachters,and I have seen a lot of episodes!!I could help you,even if you've gone past the episodes that I've seen,because before I left,I mugged Mary Poppins,took a good look at her bag,and made one of my own.Although,"she admitted"I made some major alterations to the function,so now I can pull out stuff I haven't even put in!!But there are a few drawbacks..."she said hesitantly. "Are they big ones?"Kagome asked,facinated. "Depends on what you call big..."Kara continued,"I can usually pull out things that are useful,but some times I can't,in fact,some times I pull out things that are just plain weird!!" Shippo who had been very quiet and well behaved during this conversation,finally spoke."What kinds of weird things?"he asked with innocent curious eyes. Immediatly,Kara's eyes and fingers began to twitch,and they could all see how she longed to gush over how cute he was.As if he sensed this,Shippo went to sit in Kagome's lap. "Well,one time I pulled out this adorable*eye twitch*kitten.I-It was fun*major eye twitch*to pet it."That was all she could manage before she had to dig through her bag to find something to pet.Triumphantly,she pulled out a live fox cub(normal),and began to pet it. Shippo sweatdropped.-_-'(A\n:I have always wanted to sweatdrop!!) "So you wish to join us in our quest for the Shikon Shards?"Sango summed up nearly all that had been said. "If it would be alright with you..."Kara was all of a sudden shy again. "Inuyasha,what do you think?"Kagome passed the buck to him. "Well...I guess freak girl can come along,provided that she will be useful every once in a while."Inuyasha said hesitantly. "Ramen?"Kara asked,as she pulled some out of her bag. "YUP!!!SHE CAN COME!!Inuyasha could barely contain himself. "Time for bed!!"Kagome said to Shippo."This has been a lot of exitement for just one hour!!"Seeing the pouty look on his face not unlike Inuyasha's,she added"All of us are very tired!!" Kara was too ready to sleep,she wanted to have dreams about the adventures she might have,so she simply pulled a sleeping bag out of her gym bag and asked if anyone needed anything,before drifting off to sleep. :| Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803858 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew Lyle Global Moderator Posted September 16, 2008 Global Moderator Share Posted September 16, 2008 Chapter 1:The Mysterious Stranger care to sum it up? got no time to read your gibber gabber Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803856 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minimoose Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 :o You should care This thread travels too fast to actually comment on anything! Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803860 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sethos Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Chapter 3:This chapter makes my head hurt They were all staring at Kara.She was standing there with a confused look on her face."That can't be right!!"she muttered to herself angrily. "What?"Kagome finally asked. "I told you I haven't seen the whole series,right?"Kara said with a worried look on her face. "Yeah,what about it?"Inuyasha said while being slightly distracted by a tentacle crawling out of her open bag. "This never happened in what I saw,and I don't think it's in what I didn't see.And if that's right,we must be in one of the fanfics on the internet!!I hope this is the only one we'll be doing,and that the author is pretty happy.Some are really angsty,for instance,I read a fic where Kagome freaks out and kills everyone!!!And some are out of scenario like your all kids in a highschool,or the humans or demons are enslaved to the one another.I won't go into details though.This isn't any fanfic I've read,but can I still come along and help?I've got my bag,and I think Naraku is a creep,one who should be slowly and painfully killed.But,now your all probably thinking I talk too much and too fast and that I'm nuts. *gasp**deep breath**choke*"As she finished that long speech she began to breath again,and they began to stare again. "How can you talk like that without your head exploding?"Shippo wanted to know. "It's a gift."she said still trying to resume normal breathing patterns.While Kara had been babbling,the tentacle had snuck up on Sango and it got her. "AHHHHHH!!!MIROKU!!HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU NOT TO TOUCH ME THERE!!!"Sango shreiked.The tentacle,upon hearing the scream,had gone back into the bag,and Inuyasha decided it would be more fun to let Sango draw her own conclusions than to tell her the real cause. "BUT I DIDN'T!!"Miroku kept insisting,as Sango bonked him repeatedly over the head. "Can we get back to the problem at hand?"Kagome said in an irritated voice."This could be a story where something awful happens!!"Then she ran up to Inyasha and hugged him tightly.Inuyasha blushed.(A\n:Gotta love the blush!!!!!)Kagome sobbed,"I would never want to kill you!!Not you or anyone else!!" "Heh,it's okay Kagome."Inuyasha said getting even redder. Miroku stopped being swirly-eyed,winked at Inuyasha and said,"He may be right Kagome.This story(A\n:They had accepted that it was,indeed a story.)has had little sadness,and mostly humor.Perhaps the author is merely some crazy kid who wants to write an adventure for us to be in." "Uh,yeah.See,I've been thinking I'M writing this in another different demension!!I mean,who else would put me in a fanfic?The Easter Bunny?No,I've dreamed of being on one of my favorite shows since forever!!!The me in the other demention must have finally sat down and started writing!!That means she is writing what I'm saying right now!!Woah,my mind is spinning.Let's just get this straight.I would never make a bad fic where you all die,or write stupid things like Kagome is dating Miroku or Sesshomaru."Kara said,and once again started to breath.Inuyasha was growling over the last two suggestions. Kagome,noticing his reaction,said,"I don't want to date Miroku or your brother,so calm down!!"She was still hugging him,so his face took red to a whole new level.(A\n:I love to make him blush and be startled!!*giggle*^_~) Kara,who was now breathing at a normal pattern,said,"Let's simply ignore the fact that I'm supposedly writing all of this,and just act normal!" "Okay!"was the group reply. "Now,who was that,*ahem*,lady?"Miroku said as he turned red.(A\n:I'm a poet,and don't know it!!) "Yeah,and what did you say about her name?"Sango said after she sniggered at Miroku.(A\n:Here is the formation:Inuyasha is still beet red from being hugged by Kagome,who still hasn't noticed,and therefore has not let go.Sango is standing next to Miroku and the open bag.I'm standing next to Sango,and Shippo has jumped off Miroku's shoulder,as he didn't want to be attacked with Miroku,and is now investigating my bag.Sally the magical silver ducky,is nowhere.Here that?No Sally the magical silver ducky!!Now be quiet,you voice in my head that tells me to add silly characters!!I finally stood up to it!!Yay!!^_^) "Her name is Luna.Luna means having to do with the moon.And speaking of which,"she said as she finally noticed their surroundings,"it was the afternoon when we came here,and after me talking for a ridiculusly(Sp?)long time,it's night.Let's go back to just outside the village and camp out."Kara yawned"I am getting sleepy." Later,when they were all set up,they sat around the campfire and roasted marshmallows for dessert.Then they discussed their plans. "We should go out and find that demon and kill it!!"said Inuyasha. "I sense the Shikon Shard in the area just outside or in the village.It's strange,there is something hazy about where I sense it.I can feel it,but it's like it's found a way to conceal itself."Kagome said with much confusion. "That means we can stay in the immediate area.It also means that MIROKU can stay near his GIRLFRIEND!!HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!Like he could get a girlfriend with the way he acts!!"Sango laughed at him. "Sango,do you not like the way I behave?"Miroku said and targeted his prey once again.Everyone else just sweatdropped.-_-' "Of course I don't like the wa-MIROKU!!!YOU'RE GONNA DIE!!"Sango launched an attack on his head with a nearby rock. "We're going to bed."Kagome said refering to herself and Shippo. "Miroku never needs sleeping pills.All he has to do is go about his favorite pastime."Kara said with a shake of her head(A\n:Another poem!!). "So,what should we do?"Sango asked in a bored voice. "I thought I would practice summoning demons.There are some in the back of the book whose main purpose is to be summoned for practice."Kara said in an excited voice."I've never really summoned a demon before."she admmitted. "Can you summon bad demons?"Inuyasha asked."I don't want to be wasting my time killing demons that come when they're called." "Only if I mess up,or change the summoning spell enough so it summons the opposite kind of demon."Kara said as she flipped through her book. "Then you'd better not mess up,especially when it really matters!!And these demons that you summon better not hurt Kagome!!!!!"Inuyasha said,angry with the very thought of Kagome hurt.He looked at her sleeping in her sleeping bag with Shippo,and wished she wouldn't make him feel so uncomfortable. "It's cute the way you like her."Kara said,giggling. "Finally someone just comes out and says it!!About time!!!!"Sango said with relief. "Who said I liked her?!?!?!"Inuyasha said angrily,although both her and Sango could see him blushing.(A\n:See?It's cute when I make him upset!!^_^) Kara reached into her bag and passed him all her manga books."Look through those,and knowing I've read them,and tell me you don't like her."Kara said with a triumphant look on her face. Inuyasha skimmed through the books,and with a lot of blushing he saw how obvious he was.He passed them back and,with tremendous amounts of blushing,said,"Okay then,mayby." Sango looked in shock at him.This only made him blush more.(A\n:HAHAHA!!!I LOVE IT WHEN HE BLUSHES!!)As she continued to stare,she said,"I can't belive she actually got you to say that!!!"Inuyasha's clothes looked pink compared to his face.(A\n:More Inuyasha blushing action!CUTE!!)"Wow,Kara you must be magic or something!!"Sango was in awe. "Actually,"Kara said as she dug through her bag,"I am studying other things than summoning."She pulled out another book and they looked at the title. "Real Magic for Fake Dummies."Sango read aloud."So can you do anything?" "Not yet.So far it's been all reading."Kara seemed to be eager to start to learn magic,and said,"I'm waiting for an idea as on where to start."Then she yawned."We should go to bed.It's late,and goodness knows what might happen tomorrow!!" So they went to bed,Inuyasha in his usual upright sleeping position,Sango on a woven mat with Kilala,and Kara in her sleeping bag.It would haved looked very cozy if not for the still swirly-eyed Miroku eating the ground.A figure up in the tree looked on and said,"I know what will happen tomorrow.*evil laugh*" Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803862 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cormier6083 Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 :o You should careThis thread travels too fast to actually comment on anything! You're too late. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803876 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sethos Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Chapter 4:The Discussion at Breakfast The next morning Miroku woke up to a terrible headache.And a mouthful of dirt.Sango,therefore,woke up to a pretty sight."I'm waking up the right way!"she said as she streched,"To a heaping helping of Miroku after being pummeled!!"she said with a grin. "Thanks for your concern!"Miroku said sarcasticly. "No problem!"Sango said cheerily."Always happy to give concern!" "Would you two shut up?"Inuyasha said opening his eyes all of a sudden. "Oh,Inuyasha!I didn't know you were awake too!"said Kagome as she made some bacon."I was talking to Kara about last night after I went to bed." Inuyasha gave Kara a look of horror and then went very red.Kara,however,was looking unconcernedly through her demon summoning book. "Oh,r-really?"he said carefully. "Yeah,and you don't have to worry,"she said as she took the bacon out of the pan and put the sausages in,"I have every speck of faith I have in your ability to protect me!"Kagome asked Sango to watch the food while she went to take a bath. Inuyasha was stunned."What did you say to her?!?!How much does she know?"he demanded of her furiously. "Wow,your starting to sound like me,all paranoid and stuff!!"was her response. "So then,you didn't tell her anything?"he said hopefully. "No,I told you I wouldn't,and I didn't!Yeesh,you'd think you'd trust me as you threatened my life!"she said as she rolled her eyes. "What,may I ask,happened last night?What was said that was so important?"Miroku asked with excitement. Before she could stop herself,Sango told him,"Kara got Inuyasha admit he might like Kagome!!"Then Inuyasha made a sound of protest,and she said,"Woops!" This was news to both Miroku and Shippo.They never thought he would admit to liking Kagome."I knew it!!"was all Shippo said at first. "Is it that obvious?"said Inuyasha dazedly. "To people like us,"said Miroku,"yes,but you do a good job of hiding it from Kagome.With all your name calling,yelling,pouting,and just plain meaness,Kagome thinks you don't even want her as a friend." "But I do want her!As a friend...*blush*(A\n:I'm gonna go on a blush marathon every once in a while.)I just don't want her to know...that I MIGHT like her!Stupid girl,thinking I hate her!" They all sweatdropped.-_-' "Quite the romantic,isn't he?"Miroku asked Kara. "Oh yes,he's a real lady's man,,just like you Miroku!"Kara said sarcasticly"He and you attract the same amount of women.*giggle*" "I think that was the best insult I've heard in a while!Give me five!"Sango said as she slapped Kara's hand. "Since when am I part of an insult?!?!?!"Inuyasha asked,very irritated. Shippo chose now to insert his comment."Kagome deserves better than you!!"he shouted,sticking his tongue out at him. Inuyasha looked like his worst fears had been confirmed."maybe,"he said quietly,"she thinks so too."He smelled Kagome coming back."Listen,both of you,you tell her anything and I'll rip your throats out."he threatened,but it was a half-hearted threat. "I'm taking a walk."he said shortly,and walked off in the opposite direction that Kagome was coming from. "Hey,what's that smell?"Kagome said coming up and seeing a lot of shocked and sad looking people,quite contrary to when she left."Hello?Come in!Earth to all the zonked out people!!" Sango looked at her and said,"What?" "I asked what the smell is."Kagome repeated. "Oh,that would be the uh-FOOD!!!!I FORGOT!!I'M SORRY!!!!"Sango was very worried about Inuyasha,and hadn't noticed it. "That's okay we still have the bacon to ea-Kilala?!?!Did you eat all the bacon?!"Kagome scolded the naughty demon kitty. "Wow,sorry I'm not very attentive today!"Sango said as she guiltily looked at the empty plate,like she had eaten the bacon,instead of her cat. "That's okay,"Kagome said nicely,"now we can have Ramen for breakfast!!Inuyasha will be very happy!!........Where is he anyway?"she looked around,but saw no sign of him. "He.....went to take a walk."Miroku said slowly. "Anyone else just hear that?"Kara asked suddenly. "I think so,"Sango said,"let's just listen again." They all heard it then.It was a small squeaking noise that seemed to surround them.All of a sudden rats the size of goats came scurrying out of nowhere.Hundreds of them literally launched themselves at them,and they immeadiatly(Sp?) snapped into action.Sango took off her outer clothes to reveal her demon exterminater outfit,and stood next to Kilala who had changed in size.Miroku started beating them off with his staff.Shippo sprang into action by jumping,terrified,onto Kagome's shoulder,and Kagome dodged the spiders to get to her bow and arrow and she began to shoot them.Kara reached into her bag and pulled out a spear and dodged some rats and at least managed to hit others.Then she pulled out an orange marble from her pocket. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803880 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rappy Veteran Posted September 16, 2008 Veteran Share Posted September 16, 2008 Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803884 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sethos Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Chapter 5:Ikumia(A\n:Yeah,my names suck!) She looked at the marble and said,"You'd better work!!Our lives could depend on it!!"With that she pulled out a lighter,held it up to the marble,and quickly threw it away from her.At once all the rats around her fell away and started to incinerate.Then she started to do her "Happy Dance". "Woah,I wouldn't start celebrating just yet."said a cold voice from the shadows.They all turned around to look at the eerie little man who stepped out of the darkness.He was about the same size as Kara,except that he was an old man.He had a pinched look about his face and his skin had a brownish tinge.He was carrying a wooden pipe,and many other woodwind instruments hung in a bag at his waist.A grin played on his lips and his eyes that burned like coals went strait to Kagome. "He's got a Shikon Shard!!It's not the same one we're looking for,because I can still feel it in its concealment.But he still has one,so be carefull!!!"Kagome shouted before anyone even registered that he was after her alone. "You have burned my rats!But for now,no matter,I'll just summon more!!"he shouted in anger.Then he put his pipe to his lips and began to play.A blood boiling tune came out.It made you want to scream for hours on end,then rip through your skin,just to relive some heat.Their hands automaticly went to their ears.It was too much.Kagome screamed. ~~~~~~~~~~~ A while away Inuyasha sitting in a tree heard her scream and started to dash to her rescue. ~~~~~~~~~~~ The little man finally stopped playing,and when he did,hundreds of more rats came. "My name is Ikumia."(A\n:So I suck at coming up with names?So what?)he said with a smile to shame a crocodile.(A\n:Ahh,poetry.It does the soul good.)Suddenly,two of the rat's long skinny tales lashed out and bound Kagome. "Kara,who is this guy?!?!"Kagome asked as she struggled. "He seems to be The Pied Piper of Feudal Japan."Kara said without any sign of concern. "Don't fall over yourself to help me!!!Oh,no!!It's fun here being tied up with rats tails!!"Kagome shouted sacasticly,irritated at Kara's indifference. "Duh.Inuyasha has probably heard you scream and is on his way here right now!!!!"Kara said in a bored voice. Kagome stopped stuggling and said,"Oh yeah!!Silly me,I forgot!!"Kagome now relaxed and looked at Ikumia and said,"You're dead meat when he gets here!!" Kara was now digging through her pockets and she found what she was looking for,and pulled out a little electric yellow marble."Here it is!!I think marbles are gonna be my favorite way of casting spells!!So easy to carry!!"Kara looked at it and giggled."This one will leave bodies so Inuyasha will see just what was attacking us.Though I doubt he'll like the idea of us being attacked at all!"Then,remembering how to use the little marble she held,she said,"Start making static!!Lots of static!!"They looked at her funny,and she sighed and said,"Shippo,go into my bag and get these whatever is near the top.It should useful."Shippo bounced off of Kagome's shoulder,and landed right next to the bag.He looked at it,grabbed something and held it up. "Will these help?"Shippo asked as he looked curiously at the contents of the bag he was holding. "Perfect!!Now,there is a skinny end of each thing inside,so blow into that end and when the balloons are full,tie off the end.We'll need four.Then give one to Miroku and Sango,and keep two for you and Kagome.Then,everyone needs to rub their balloons on their heads.Shippo,you rub Kagome's balloon on her head."They all stared at her still,except Shippo,who was getting to work.Then when he had them,he gave one to everyone.They all looked at their balloons for a moment with doubt,then they did as she said.Then she threw the marble onto the ground hard,and lighting flashed in the clearing, striking every rat around them down. "No matter,"the evil man said,"I'll summon even more!!!"He raised his pipe to his mouth,and they all covered their ears,so as to block out the heart stopping sound.But before the pipe ever touched his lips,Inuyasha came down into the clearing,and sliced him and his pipe in half. "What in the hell has been going on here?!?!"he asked with confusion. Kagome ran up and hugged Inuyasha(A\n:I love making him blush!!!!^_^),and he got very quiet,and got very red."You saved us!!"she said happily,"I knew you would!!" Shippo bounced over to Kara and asked,"What were those things?" Kara walked over to the bag of balloons pulled out a blue one,then walked over to her bag,and pulled out a helium tank.She made him a balloon,then tied a piece of string to the end.She put the balloons and helium tank away,walked up to him and gave it to him."Thanks for helping me.This is a balloon.It's mostly for decoration." Shippo happily looked at his balloon.Then suddenly looked at Kagome hugging Inuyasha and said,"I was wrong Inuyasha." "How were you wrong?"Kagome asked curiously.She reluctantly stopped hugging Inuyasha and went to the man's remains and pulled out the shard. Inuyasha went even redder.(A\n:HeeHee!!)Then Kara said,"Shippo said Inuyasha had the reflexes of a dead pig!!"Then she laughed her head off.Inuyasha went(if possible)much redder. 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Cormier6083 Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Chapter 4:The Discussion at BreakfastThe next morning Miroku woke up to a terrible headache.And a mouthful of dirt.Sango,therefore,woke up to a pretty sight."I'm waking up the right way!"she said as she streched,"To a heaping helping of Miroku after being pummeled!!"she said with a grin. "Thanks for your concern!"Miroku said sarcasticly. "No problem!"Sango said cheerily."Always happy to give concern!" "Would you two shut up?"Inuyasha said opening his eyes all of a sudden. "Oh,Inuyasha!I didn't know you were awake too!"said Kagome as she made some bacon."I was talking to Kara about last night after I went to bed." Inuyasha gave Kara a look of horror and then went very red.Kara,however,was looking unconcernedly through her demon summoning book. "Oh,r-really?"he said carefully. "Yeah,and you don't have to worry,"she said as she took the bacon out of the pan and put the sausages in,"I have every speck of faith I have in your ability to protect me!"Kagome asked Sango to watch the food while she went to take a bath. Inuyasha was stunned."What did you say to her?!?!How much does she know?"he demanded of her furiously. "Wow,your starting to sound like me,all paranoid and stuff!!"was her response. "So then,you didn't tell her anything?"he said hopefully. "No,I told you I wouldn't,and I didn't!Yeesh,you'd think you'd trust me as you threatened my life!"she said as she rolled her eyes. "What,may I ask,happened last night?What was said that was so important?"Miroku asked with excitement. Before she could stop herself,Sango told him,"Kara got Inuyasha admit he might like Kagome!!"Then Inuyasha made a sound of protest,and she said,"Woops!" This was news to both Miroku and Shippo.They never thought he would admit to liking Kagome."I knew it!!"was all Shippo said at first. "Is it that obvious?"said Inuyasha dazedly. "To people like us,"said Miroku,"yes,but you do a good job of hiding it from Kagome.With all your name calling,yelling,pouting,and just plain meaness,Kagome thinks you don't even want her as a friend." "But I do want her!As a friend...*blush*(A\n:I'm gonna go on a blush marathon every once in a while.)I just don't want her to know...that I MIGHT like her!Stupid girl,thinking I hate her!" They all sweatdropped.-_-' "Quite the romantic,isn't he?"Miroku asked Kara. "Oh yes,he's a real lady's man,,just like you Miroku!"Kara said sarcasticly"He and you attract the same amount of women.*giggle*" "I think that was the best insult I've heard in a while!Give me five!"Sango said as she slapped Kara's hand. "Since when am I part of an insult?!?!?!"Inuyasha asked,very irritated. Shippo chose now to insert his comment."Kagome deserves better than you!!"he shouted,sticking his tongue out at him. Inuyasha looked like his worst fears had been confirmed."maybe,"he said quietly,"she thinks so too."He smelled Kagome coming back."Listen,both of you,you tell her anything and I'll rip your throats out."he threatened,but it was a half-hearted threat. "I'm taking a walk."he said shortly,and walked off in the opposite direction that Kagome was coming from. "Hey,what's that smell?"Kagome said coming up and seeing a lot of shocked and sad looking people,quite contrary to when she left."Hello?Come in!Earth to all the zonked out people!!" Sango looked at her and said,"What?" "I asked what the smell is."Kagome repeated. "Oh,that would be the uh-FOOD!!!!I FORGOT!!I'M SORRY!!!!"Sango was very worried about Inuyasha,and hadn't noticed it. "That's okay we still have the bacon to ea-Kilala?!?!Did you eat all the bacon?!"Kagome scolded the naughty demon kitty. "Wow,sorry I'm not very attentive today!"Sango said as she guiltily looked at the empty plate,like she had eaten the bacon,instead of her cat. "That's okay,"Kagome said nicely,"now we can have Ramen for breakfast!!Inuyasha will be very happy!!........Where is he anyway?"she looked around,but saw no sign of him. "He.....went to take a walk."Miroku said slowly. "Anyone else just hear that?"Kara asked suddenly. "I think so,"Sango said,"let's just listen again." They all heard it then.It was a small squeaking noise that seemed to surround them.All of a sudden rats the size of goats came scurrying out of nowhere.Hundreds of them literally launched themselves at them,and they immeadiatly(Sp?) snapped into action.Sango took off her outer clothes to reveal her demon exterminater outfit,and stood next to Kilala who had changed in size.Miroku started beating them off with his staff.Shippo sprang into action by jumping,terrified,onto Kagome's shoulder,and Kagome dodged the spiders to get to her bow and arrow and she began to shoot them.Kara reached into her bag and pulled out a spear and dodged some rats and at least managed to hit others.Then she pulled out an orange marble from her pocket. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803888 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sethos Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Chapter 6:Psychic That day,they went into the village to look around.As they walked through the fairly large village,they discussed the morning's events."The Pied Piper was hired by a town.He was supposed to rid the town of its rats,but he also marched the children out of the town.There are different endings,but the one that I've heard the most,"Kara said with a nod of her head,"is that he marched the rats and the children into the sea where they all drowned." "Any fox demon children?"asked Shippo with concern. "No."Kara replied and reached into her pocket.She dug around and then she pulled out a velvet drawstring bag. "Then who cares?"Shippo said with a shrug.Then he looked intrestedly(Sp?)at the bag she was holding. "Hey!!I'm still probably considered a child here!!Even though I'm a teenager."Kara looked through her bag and there was a clacking noise. "What's in there?"Shippo asked curiously. "More casting marbles.They help me summon the different variations of the elements."Kara said as she examined a dull white marble. "What element is that?"Shippo asked. "Ice,Frost,Snow,or Hail."she replied."It depends on what thing I use in conjunction with it." "MIROKU!!STOP DOING THAT!!!"Sango shouted up ahead of them. They all sweatdropped.-_-' "He never gives up!"Kagome said with a laugh. Sango was chasing Miroku with her bone boomerang.Miroku was running and trying to avoid her blows.Luna suddenly appeared and said,"Don't hurt this handsome young man!!" Sango and Miroku both sweatdropped.-_-' Sango nudged Miroku and,sniggering,said,"Don't be rude Miroku!!Say hello!!"Miroku just stood there with his sweatdrop getting bigger. "How are you today,Luna?"Kagome said politely. "Don't mock me!!"Luna said to Sango,completely ignoring Kagome."You short tempered tomboy!!" Sango looked furious,and said,"What would you know about it,you maniac?!?!?!" Everyone sweatdropped.-_-' "Maybe we should take a look around while they,*ahem*,get better aquainted."Kara said looking at the unpleasant scene. "Absolutely!!Let's go!!"said Inuyasha,eager to get away. Kara took one last look at the conflict,and turned to go,but as she did,she heard Sango say"Lunatic!!".A look of dawning comprehention(Sp?)crossed her face.She hurried them off,to leave Sango and Luna arguing,and Miroku standing there with the biggest sweatdrop ever seen,looking like an idiot. Once they were a safe distance away she said,"I just realized that the full title that Luna wouldn't tell us must be Luna the Lunatic!!"She added,"I think she's up to something." "Yeah,but can we talk about this over dinner?I'm starved!!"Inuyasha said and his stomach made agreeing noises. "Okay,we can go back to camp,and I'll make you a big bowl of Ramen!!"Kagome said with a smile."We can come back later to drag those two away." ~~~~~~~~~~~ Back at camp,Kagome set to work on making dinner.She sent Shippo to get water for the Ramen.Kara started to make sure she had matirials(Sp)to activate lots of her marbles.She dug through her bag and pulled out items such as a feather,a handheld fan,a flashlight,a caterpillar in a jar,a flower,a test tube filled with dirt,a small rock,a plasic baggie filled with darkness,and few balloons were just some of the items she put into a small pack that fit on her back.(A\n:Are you getting annoyed with my inadvertent rhyming yet?)After half an hour,Shippo came back and asked where the stream was.(A\n:-_-')Kagome kindly took him by the hand and they went off to get some water. After they left Kara said,"Wanna see a way I think I can get psychic powers?"She could barely contain her excitement at the thought. He rolled his eyes and responded,"Oh,absolutely!This I gotta see!!" She looked in her marble bag and pulled out a swirly purple marble.Then she brought out a small box and put the marble in through a hole in the top,and on the bottom there was a little cup on the bottom and it was filled with purple dust.She detatched the cup,looked at it,and filled it with a small amount of water.Then,she looked at him and said,"Bottoms up!"Then she drank all the water in the little cup. ~She's probably gonna trick me somehow.~Inuyasha thought. "Uh,how will tha-Kara?Are you okay?"Inuyasha asked and watched her staring at him with her eyes closed.He didn't know how she was staring,but he could tell. Her eyes snapped open and she said indignantly,"I am NOT trying to trick you!!It worked!!" "What worked?"said Kagome,who just came back with water. ~A slightly different energy is coming off Kara now.~Kagome thought with a frown. "Is my energy really different?"Kara asked her suddenly,after probing her mind. "She's doing something weird!!!"Inuyahsha said with a shocked face. Kara had her eyes closed once more,and she said,"Sango and Miroku are coming back!!Sango is NOT happy,and Mirok-*gag*Blehh!!Is that ALL Miroku ever thinks about?!?!" Inuyasha smelled them coming after she had made her comment.Shippo came dashing back behind Kagome,and Kara said,"Shippo!!That's cute!!"He asked her what was and she replied,"Your thoughts.I won't voice them if you don't want me to though." Sango stomped into camp dragging Miroku behind her."The nerve of that freak!!Calling me blind!!"She looked at all their faces and said,"What happened?" Kagome tried to collect herself and said,"Okay,let's get this straight.Kara,what happened to you ?!?!" Kara took a deep breath,and started to tell what had occurred,"I was getting items to activate my different elemental marbles.I looked at my psychic marble,and realized that I had never figured out how to use it.I thought maybe I should try and my first method came to mind.So I pulled this box out of my bag and I just guessed what it did.It ground my marble into dust,I put the dust into water and drank it.I now have psychic powers." "Why did you do that?"Kagome asked "I wanted to see if the marble could be put to use.I didn't think it would really work!!"Kara said."Hold on,I want to try something."She focused hard on a message she wanted to send to Inuyasha. ~Does this work?~she thought. ~Obviously.~came Inuyasha's reply. "Well,that works."Kara said simply."I can open a link and talk to people with my mind." "Oo oo oo,try it on me!!"Shippo said,jumping up and down. ~Do you think this is cool?~she thought. ~Yeah,of course!!~his excited reply came. ~Me too.~she thought and she smiled at him. "Let's see,what Sango is-AHH!!That's not Sango!!Miroku needs to think about different things!!!"she shouted as she shuddered."I would like to say though,that I don't intend to invade anyone's privacy.Unless I need to,of course.But now I can read the bad guy's mind!!That could come in handy."she said seriously. "Now,what was Miroku thinking about again?"Sango said with a dangerous gleam in her eye,as she looked at swirly-eyed Miroku. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803892 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATGC Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 WIN!Someone had to rate them right? It's a d discussion forum, not a viewing forum :p ninja cat +1 Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803894 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sethos Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 I know you're all mesmerized by the story Chapter 7:Shippo's New Friend The next day Kara woke up early.She decided that today she would practice her magic,and then later her demon summoning.She was looking through her marble bag to pick an element to practice,when Shippo hopped up behind her. "Hi,what are you doing?"he asked all of a sudden. "AHHH!!What?Oh,sorry Shippo.I thought I was the only one up,plus I startle very easily."Kara said trying to catch her breath.She had jumped and some of her marbles spilled onto the ground.Shippo started to help pick up the spilled marbles,until a inky black one came to his hand. "What element is this?"he asked and looked at it uneasily. "That's darkness.There really are only the four main elements,but these are sub-divisions."Kara said. "Why not summon that element?Come on,show me!!"Shippo said excitedly. "If I did that I might not be able to change it back until I found the right marble,and by then someone would have noticed."Kara explained. "Good point."Shippo said nodding his head."But can you show me some?" "Of course,it would be my pleasure!!"Kara said happily."But which one to do..."she trailed off,but then decided."See,my bag can sense things like need,or want.So,if I want a bag of marbles to summon the elements,I can pick the elements I want.One of my favorites is one I sorta made up.I call it the good element.I haven't tried it yet.Want me to?"she asked. "Yeah!!Which ones are they?"he asked excitedly. "The pink ones."she replyed. "Wow,they're really light!!"Shippo said with suprise. "Here's why.It's just like blowing a kiss.Really easy."she said,taking the marble he handed her.She gave it a swift kiss and blew it off her hand.It went up into the air and exploded.As it did,several things happened. A rainbow appeared in the sky and pretty flowers sprouted out of the ground.The air around them became pleasantly warm and they felt happy and content all of a sudden.The field around them was full of happy creatures playing. Not just normal animals either.Happy demons began to romp and play in the field.There was a bear demon with three eyes that started to roll around on the ground.There were a few wolf demon cubs that were play fighting in the middle of the field,very close to them.Shippo eyed them warily.He was so busy waching them though,that he didn't see,as Kara did,the little girl fox cub,who was happily chasing a butterfly. Kara tapped Shippo on the shoulder and pointed her out.You could see the pure joy in Shippo's eyes as he ran over to play with her,and it made Kara even happy just to watch the two team up against the butterfly,and yet they could still not quite catch it. "Wow,what a beautiful way to wake up!!"Kagome said behind her. "AHHH!!Oh,sorry.I startle easily."Kara said,so content in watching the fun Shippo was having,she didn't remember this would most definately wake the others up. "AWWWW!!Shippo has a new friend!!!"Kagome squealed."What happened?!?!This is wonderful!!Miroku just HUGGED Sango instead of his usual thing!!It all makes me want to hug something cute!!!"At this point Inuyasha came up behind them looking around in an almost eager way,his ears twitching at every noise.(A\n:Greeeaaat timing.-_-')Kagome hugged him,and instead of his usual blush(A\n:No blush?!?!That's not happy!!!WAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!)he smiled and hugged her back.(A\n:Sorry for the mushy stuff,it just came out.)Kara,as usual,sat and watched all the bliss.Shippo ran up to Kara and showed her his new friend.She was pretty,she had dark brown hair which was in two buns tied with dark blue ribbons,bright blue eyes,and was wearing a sky blue kimono. "Her name is Kiyato(A\n:Yes,this name sucks too.Don't get your pants in a bunch!!)!!!"Shippo said as Kiyato smiled."Guess what?Girl fox demons use flowers instead of leaves!!Go on,show her!!"Shippo encouraged his friend to show her skills.Kiyato reached up into her hair,an pulled out a white rose that was fixed in it.She set it on top of her head and there was a *pop* and a little blue kitten was right where she had been.Another *pop* and she was back. "Hello Kiyato!!"Kara said happily,"I'm Kara,and over there are Inuyasha,Kagome,Miroku,and Sango."she said,pointing to each of them in turn. "So,Shippo,is this your girlfriend?"Inuyasha said,teasing him.The marble effect was wearing off.Shippo blushed,(A\n:SHIPPO BLUSHING?!?!An unexplored level of cute!!)and Kiyato just looked down. "No!!She's my FRIEND!!"Shippo said and he added,"Besides,weren't you hugging Kagome for a minute there?"He was pleased that he made Inuyasha blush.(A\n:Back to awkward blushing!!Life is good.) "Is she coming along with us?"Sango asked. "Not another demon brat to torture me!!"Inuyasha moaned. "In that case,absolutely!!"Shippo said with a giggle. Kiyato was on Inuyasha's head in a moment."Why do the half-demon's ears twitch?"she said as she tugged on them. Shippo laughed while everyone else sweatdropped.-_-' "My parents died a while ago.And my brother disapeared."Kiyato said with a sniff. "She's coming!"all three girls said at once. "Well now that that's settled,"Miroku said,"let's eat lunch!!" Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803898 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minimoose Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 lol Cormier, what is up with that story, is anyone reading it? :p Mesmerised by your insistence. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803900 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATGC Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 no spamming guys Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/635486-8-million-by-oct-1st-2008-win/page/91/#findComment-589803902 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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