Richard Hammond Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 EXT. SPACECRAFT IN SPACE The Imperial craft has easily overtaken the Rebel Blockade Runner. The smaller Rebel ship is being drawn into the underside dock of the giant Imperial starship. INT. REBEL BLOCKADE RUNNER The nervous Rebel troopers aim their weapons. Suddenly a tremendous blast opens up a hole in the main passageway and a score of fearsome armored spacesuited stormtroopers make their way into the smoke-filled corridor. In a few minutes the entire passageway is ablaze with laserfire. The deadly bolts ricochet in wild random patterns creating huge explosions. Stormtroopers scatter and duck behind storage lockers. Laserbolts hit several Rebel soldiers who scream and stagger through the smoke, holding shattered arms and faces. An explosion hits near the robots. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476084 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazhar Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 93 No: acrossed | Yes: across It is easy to confuse "across" with "crossed" but better to keep them separate. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476086 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeston Veteran Posted April 12, 2010 Veteran Share Posted April 12, 2010 147 148 Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476088 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Richard Hammond Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 THREEPIO I should have known better than to trust the logic of a half-sized thermocapsulary dehousing assister... Artoo counters with an angry rebuttal as the battle rages around the two hapless robots. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476094 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeston Veteran Posted April 12, 2010 Veteran Share Posted April 12, 2010 148 149 Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476096 Share on other sites More sharing options...
svnO.o Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 +1! Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476100 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard Hammond Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 EXT. TATOOINE - DESERT WASTELAND - DAY A death-white wasteland stretches from horizon to horizon. The tremendous heat of two huge twin suns settle on a lone figure, Luke Skywalker, a farm boy with heroic aspirations who looks much younger than his eighteen years. His shaggy hair and baggy tunic give him the air of a simple but lovable lad with a prize-winning smile. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476102 Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoomKid Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 One more from meeeeeee :blush: Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476104 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeston Veteran Posted April 12, 2010 Veteran Share Posted April 12, 2010 149 150 Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476106 Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndrewLee Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 New entry. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476108 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard Hammond Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 A light wind whips at him as he adjusts several valves on a large battered moisture vaporator which sticks out of the desert floor much like an oil pipe with valves. He is aided by a beatup tread-robot with six claw arms. The little robot appears to be barely functioning and moves with jerky motions. A bright sparkle in the morning sky catches Luke's eye and he instinctively grabs a pair of electrobinoculars from his utility belt. He stands transfixed for a few moments studying the heavens, then dashed toward his dented, crudely repaired Landspeeder (an auto-like transport that travels a few feet above the ground on a magnetic-field). He motions for the tiny robot to follow him. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476110 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeston Veteran Posted April 12, 2010 Veteran Share Posted April 12, 2010 150 151 Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476112 Share on other sites More sharing options...
svnO.o Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 +1! Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476114 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeston Veteran Posted April 12, 2010 Veteran Share Posted April 12, 2010 151 152 Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476116 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard Hammond Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 LUKE Hurry up! Come with me! What are you waiting for?! Get in gear! The robot scoots around in a tight circle, stops short, and smoke begins to pour out of every joint. Luke throws his arms up in disgust. Exasperated, the young farm boy jumps into his Landspeeder leaving the smoldering robot to hum madly. INT. REBEL BLOCKADE RUNNER - MAIN HALLWAY The awesome, seven-foot-tall Dark Lord of the Sith makes his way into the blinding light of the main passageway. This is Darth Vader, right hand of the Emperor. His face is obscured by his flowing black robes and grotesque breath mask, which stands out next to the fascist white armored suits of the Imperial stormtroopers. Everyone instinctively backs away from the imposing warrior and a deathly quiet sweeps through the Rebel troops. Several of the Rebel troops break and run in a frenzied panic. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476118 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeston Veteran Posted April 12, 2010 Veteran Share Posted April 12, 2010 152 153 Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476122 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Richard Hammond Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 INT. REBEL BLOCKADE RUNNER A woman's hand puts a card into an opening in Artoo's dome. Artoo makes beeping sounds. INT. REBEL BLOCKADE RUNNER Threepio stands in a hallway, somewhat bewildered. Artoo is nowhere in sight. The pitiful screams of the doomed Rebel soldiers can be heard in the distance. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476126 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeston Veteran Posted April 12, 2010 Veteran Share Posted April 12, 2010 153 154 Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476128 Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Advancer Subscriber² Posted April 12, 2010 Subscriber² Share Posted April 12, 2010 Here's y creative entry: Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476130 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard Hammond Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 THREEPIO At last! Where have you been? Stormtroopers can be heard battling in the distance. THREEPIO They're heading in this direction. What are we going to do? We'll be sent to the spice mine of Kessel or smashed into who knows what! Artoo scoots past his bronze friend and races down the subhallway. Threepio chases after him. THREEPIO Wait a minute, where are you going? Artoo responds with electronic beeps. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476132 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeston Veteran Posted April 12, 2010 Veteran Share Posted April 12, 2010 154 155 Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476134 Share on other sites More sharing options...
svnO.o Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 +1! Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476136 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazhar Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 No: acrossed | Yes: across It is easy to confuse "across" with "crossed" but better to keep them separate. No: affidavid | Yes: affidavit Even if your lawyer's name is ''David,'' he issues affidavits. Link to comment https://www.neowin.net/forum/topic/891612-neowin-giveaway-hp-data-vault-x510-2tb/page/56/#findComment-592476138 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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